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“You know something, Lovi?”


“I keep wondering how you managed to survive being raised by Toni.”


“Hm. Yeah, probably.”

A few moments passed in silence.

“Why are you asking?”

“He’s running around with Gilbert and Francis trying to catch a tomato fairy that I think is actually just a hummingbird.”

“…That tomato bastard.”

You laughed and moved to lie on the grass next to Lovi. Of course you wouldn’t actually say anything mean about Toni; the two of you had been best friends since you were little countries just starting out in the world. You guys were inseparable; whenever one of you got into a fight, the other was right there in the thick of it. If you ever had a problem, Toni was always the first person you went to, regardless of what was wrong. And you were the first person he sought out as well.

But sometimes you had to question his mental state, which is what led to the conversation you were currently having with Lovi as the two of you relaxed in Toni’s backyard. Earlier, Toni swore he spotted a tomato fairy and took off after it, dragging the other components of the Bad Touch Trio with him.

So here you and Lovi were, waiting for them to come back while questioning the three grown men’s mental capacity. You were honestly kind of surprised at how long it was taking them to get back. They couldn’t have gone that far could they?

…No, they definitely could.

“Maybe we should just go inside and start dinner,” you suggested, lazily twirling a strand of grass. Lovi just grunted and stood up, letting you know that he agreed with what you’d said. So you stood up and the two of you headed back into Toni’s house to prepare dinner.

You were just in the middle of cutting up some fresh tomatoes when a blur of blond, brown, green, white, red, and blue swept into the kitchen.





“Au revoir!”


Greetings and farewells were shouted in three different languages as the blur sped through the room and upstairs. You stood there in shock before looking at Lovi in bewilderment.

“What just…happened?”

Lovi scowled and began viciously chopping up the herbs. “Tsk. Those bastards.”

“Wait…that was the guys?”

“Who else would it be?”

“I don’t know. But why did they run upstairs like that?”


“…Lovi that was really suspicious.”

The Italian just spluttered for a moment before growling and whipping around to put the herbs in the pot on the stove, not bothering to answer you. A loud crash from upstairs made you jump and stare at the ceiling before looking at Lovi again, only to see him diligently ignoring you. You scowled and tossed a towel at his head.

“You’re being mean. Tell me what’s going on.”




“Come on, Lovi, can’t you just—“

“I’m not allowed to, okay?”

That surprised you. What could those three be up to that you weren’t allowed to know what was going on? Toni never kept secrets from you, and that included things he did with Francis and Gilbert. But before you could ask Lovi anything else, Francis and Gil conveniently charged into the room and over to Lovi.

“Sorry, frau,” Gil said, clamping a hand over Lovi’s lower face. “Can’t let him spill any secrets, ja?”

“Oui, that would ruin all the fun!” Francis said with a grin. Your scowl returned and you opened your mouth to question them but were once again prevented from doing that. Gil removed his hand from Lovi’s mouth and grabbed him under his arms while Francis took hold of his legs as the two men ran out, shouting goodbyes as Lovi screamed curses at them.

You were beginning to wonder if the BTT had decided to start experimenting with drugs. Because seriously, this day couldn’t get any weirder.

And then you saw the turtle.

“Wha—“ You stared in disbelief. There was legitimately a turtle walking from the hall, into the kitchen, and towards the living room. And it had a small flower on its back.

You watched its progress with interest, only to have your gaze caught by a second turtle following right after the first. But this one had a small card on its back instead of a flower with the word “Will” on it.

Deciding that there must be some purpose behind these turtles, you sat down and waited to see if any more would come. And you were right to do so. A third turtle was following after the first two with a flower on its back. Then a fourth with another card that said “you.” This pattern continued as more turtles made their way through the room, alternating between flowers and cards.

You were fighting back a blush as the last turtle with a flower walked past you. All together there had been thirteen turtles with flowers and the message “Will you go out with me?” spaced out on six cards. And since the other men had already left, you could only assume Toni was behind this.

And you were proven right when said man entered the room with a bouquet of your favorite flowers in hand and a shy smile on his face. You lost the fight against your blush and stared down at the tile bashfully, nervously playing with a stray thread on your shirt. You couldn’t believe this was happening. Your best friend wanted to date you? If you were honest, you’d thought about dating Toni before, but always assumed he would never be interested. Not many guys went after their best female friend. Especially considering the fact that he was exposed to way more beautiful women than you when he hung out with Francis and Gil.

“So…will you?”

Toni’s soft question broke you out of your thoughts and you hesitantly looked up at him through your lashes.

“Are…are you sure?”

Toni tilted his head in confusion before his face softened as he realized what you meant. He smiled gently and went over to take your face in his hands.

“I have never cared for a woman as much as I care for you. You are, without a doubt, the most beautiful, intelligent, amazing, wonderful girl I’ve ever known. I can’t imagine myself being with anyone else.”

And with that said, Toni slowly leaned forward to capture your lips with his own in a short kiss that somehow managed to leave you completely breathless. He pulled away and rested his forehead against yours, a smile on his face.

“So what do you say?” he asked, rubbing his thumbs over your cheeks. “Will you give me a chance?”

A wide smile spread across your face as you lightly pushed your forehead into his.

“Of course.”
Ok, here is the request for :iconromanolover18:. I am honestly not sure how I feel about this. I like it, but part of me feels like I messed something up, even though I don't know what it would be. But I hope you like it and I'm sorry it took so long! Actually, the rest of these requests are going to take a while because school sucks. But anyway.

I don't own Hetalia or any of these men.
You belong to :iconsexyspain2plz:
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Wolfy7980 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 14, 2015 did you train a bunh of turtle to do that???????
spainwife Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
lskjñalkdjlskfjd SO FUCKING ADORABLE ;v; Tu wants something  :iconspainlaplz:  :iconmochispainplz:
gamemaster2themax Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015
EpicCatBomb Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015   Digital Artist
Guerra7Noche Featured By Owner May 4, 2015
hetaliaizmal1fe Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Nawww I wanna turtle now
Cinnamon-Badass Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
Honestly, I wanna keep a turtle now....;A;
Skylox-Addiction Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Is it okay if I try to draw the adorable Turtle Parade? Kitty begging 
bluerose269 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure, go ahead. Just please make sure to credit me for the idea.
Skylox-Addiction Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! :3 thank you and I will
JackFleutie Featured By Owner Edited Mar 29, 2015  Student General Artist
I like turtles, they are awesome ^3^
me:-_____-" sigh*
missMiku-chanX Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Student
Now I have another reason to love turtles ^^
chica105 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
* says in stitch vioce* anyone who loves turtle won't be hurt by my magic 8)
SukiAckerman Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Artist
my boyfriend did something similar to this but he used my kitten Sebby and the note was attached to his collar
Blakemckayla Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
I could imagine one of the turtles messing up and it spelling "Will you out go with me?"
Eliana89364057 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
What about "Will me go out with you?" XD
Neko-Lucifer Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015
Of course i'll out go with you!! XD
PeaceLuvLife Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Awwwwwwww! Super cute!
indaybella Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm crying because of how adorable this is!!!
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Student General Artist

..... turtles???
Romacat Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
D'awwwwwww~ Is it weird that I'd think it was super cute if someone did this for me?
lilkirby8899 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lyra-the-NeKo Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
TURTLE APPOCLIPS! AND SPAIN IS THERE LEADER!!! SO KAWAII!!!! *fan girls* :dignity-laugh: 
Kawaii Turtle
PhoenixNinja66 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWWWWWWWWW KAWAII~! I would totally love someone to ask me out like that!!! :3 kawaii kawaii kawaii
SakuraTreeLake Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Using my favorite animal? Proud. Toni you should be proudKawaii Turtle 
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yup same here turtles are de cutest!Kawaii Turtle turtle Tu wants something Turtle Bite Butt Sexc Turtle 
Explosion245 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Died on an overdose of fluffiness and adorableness and turtles
Oshaco Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
This is sooooo beautiful, adorable, and overall wonderfully written!
spainlover22 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
i like the turtles and lovi just being himself and ending up geting dragged away
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014   General Artist
I would have been picking up each of the turtles and cuddlin them! 
wizardturtlegirl Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
i would have picked up the turtles along the way, and named them when i grabbed them.
PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
LeonorCarriedo Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This has to be the cutest confession in the history of confessions!! Eep! 
TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i love creative ways to do stuff like these owo.
You could carve your numbers on a potato and toss it a guy and say. Call me if you can stud :P (stud, spud heuhuehue)

Or i can see the future. okay, after three seconds someone really shy is going to ask you an important question. involving next (date of your date.).
But if it comes true depends on you. 1. 2. 3. will you go on a date with me on (date)?

Go on a date with me. (why?) it's for science to see if i can talk to a very beautiful/handsome girl/boy.

Theanimeangel Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
I give Toni the award for most creative way to ask a girl out. *Takes out mallet size of a garage. eyes twitching.* any objections.????
cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
A guy proposed to his girlfriend with about 99 IPhone sixes in Japan on singles day but was rejected. A man also had a wedding or proposed to his girlfriend with 1,001 hotdogs.
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
this is so completely sweet and adorable!!! so no objections from me!!! so the award will go to Toni.
*announcer voice* and the award for most creative (and completely sweet and original too) way to ask a girl out goes to Antonio Fernandez Carriedo (is this correct? i don't want to be wrong and stupid about it) for his turtle parade!!!! *claps like in award shows*
MalevolentPetals Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Writer
Forget dating just marry me!
AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
someday just 4 lol's i will make my character say no to the whole happy end thing, like imagine the look on spains face if she said no!
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I'm squealing at the turtle parade its so ADORABLE!!!!
lavygirl Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I found a turtle before I even knew about hetalia so I brought him home with me and screamed "Can we keep him?!"
But my mom said no becuase I found him on the ground and it's illegal to do that so we put him back where we found him. Once I got back I was saying that I was going to name him Antonio!
Explosion245 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*sitting in a corner fangirling over Spain and his turtles with their flowers >w<*
Lagoonaxjackson Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
Turtles! :iconspainturtleplz: 
Little-Flame13 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
And then you saw the turtle.

...that made my day. I'm not kidding. Awesomest story ever. Good job.
bluerose269 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.
Little-Flame13 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Nah problem!
LadyofLegends Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
Ah! A parade of turtles! If that happened to me, I'd like.... :iconhandspazzplz:
bluerose269 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha I think most people would do the same.
OtterOfFrost Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Turtle parade...
Seems like something my friend would do... Because he tends to see no problem with normality's boundaries.  For example, he once said he would go on a date with a girl if her friend lost to him on an online game which is basically clicking on an image of a cookie. By the time he won, the girl already left
BloodRed21 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student
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